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monday afternoon and
my lover is studying;
i am wondering if he remembers that time when
we learnt together the geometric shapes -
circled are his lips when
the sun draws himself upon them;

i am jealous.

earth has his own anatomy -
them science people called him "pear";
maybe the fruit was before the planet
or maybe the planet grew out of it,
which makes us pearestrials, but
i wouldn't know;

i don't do science.

i don't even do words -
words are too academic sometimes;
it's propestorous (exclamation mark)
and my fingers are only made to waltz with yours;
i'm sorry when i stumble,
you know my forefinger is high heel sensitive;

there's too many is in the world.

monday's moving towards evening
my lover's still studying
earth is still a pear
there's Pretty Woman on tv
the food is not getting any warmer
my french will always be poor

kiss me tonight.
:iconineedchemicalx:
this is the writing thing Mom asked me .








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~NishitokyoGirl Jan 6, 2013  Student Writer
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*BeauCyphre Jan 6, 2013  Professional Writer
Writing a poem is difficult: You don't have too much words to tell your story, and your story should reach all your listeners' hearts.
Writing a poem is easy sometimes: When you're deep down there with your little ship moving like an aeroplane underneath the oceans' brighter places, everything comes in a rush 'cause your mind's really fast to surrender to your heart now. Your mind's scared in places like this deep down below and so high above everything, and it's beautifully aware that the heart knows better.

Your words are all about the heart, born in this place deep inside, and everything you're telling me is as much about your love, your lover, your world as about myself, my core, the fire within. So you reach me:

"i don't do science."

And:

"there's too many is in the world."

And:

"kiss me tonight."

Your abracadabra finally makes everything complete.
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:iconlinnae:
There is such... utter-ness in this picture.
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:iconlalita17:
this is fabulous :love: you're so multi-talented :la:
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:icondecares:
Goodness. I just feel so MUCH like this up there right now.

Moments, conserved in words.


Beautiful : )
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:iconineedchemicalx:
aaah... thank you...
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