Your orange skin makes me warm in December
like the Sea is a blanket to the sand
and the Sun nurtures youth to our land
i'll be Your pocket -
You may keep all Your secrets inside of me
be shy and be not
there's nothing You should be afraid of
while You're here, with me
on this Pale Blue Dot.
I love this. Great diction
i really like its shortness...
Very interesting, I really like it!
I like it
So simple, and yet so amazingly beautiful. I love it!
I love this (:
Very nice (:
Beautiful work as usual. Itīs always a relief when the lady is inviting and understanding, itīs like a coke in the desert, when the lady is in "angry" mode, itīs more traumatizing than it should be.
i really like this c:
Interesting poem, but where you "i'll be Your pocket -" the "i" should be capital like "I." Just thought I'd tell you.