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Orange skin

My dearest,
Your orange skin makes me warm in December
like the Sea is a blanket to the sand
and the Sun nurtures youth to our land

i'll be Your pocket -
You may keep all Your secrets inside of me
be shy and be not

there's nothing You should be afraid of
while You're here, with me
on this Pale Blue Dot.
a few simple thoughts,
at school.



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s-o-n-j-a Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
Frumos c:
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Erhab-Etta Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this. Great diction :)
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
thank you so!
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Sparia Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student General Artist
i really like its shortness...
and title!
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
thank you :)
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Sparia Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student General Artist
you are welcome :)
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Silvers-crow Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very interesting, I really like it!
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
thank you :)
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TASHcreator Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
I like it :)
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
thank you :)
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rattitude Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
adore!
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
merciiiii!
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Asrath Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
So simple, and yet so amazingly beautiful. I love it!
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
wow, thanks!!
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PlatinaStar Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
How sweet :)
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
thaaankies :)
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BlutendeMesser Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this (:
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
thankyou..
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M-Victoria-W Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Very nice (:
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
thanks :)
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amiga-32 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
Lovely :)
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
aww, thank you :)
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amiga-32 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
Your Welcome :)
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VictorHugo Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Beautiful work as usual. Itīs always a relief when the lady is inviting and understanding, itīs like a coke in the desert, when the lady is in "angry" mode, itīs more traumatizing than it should be.
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
haha, you're right, "a coke in the desert", i loved that :) thank you
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dolphinattack Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012   Digital Artist
i really like this c:
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
thank you :)
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Interesting poem, but where you "i'll be Your pocket -" the "i" should be capital like "I." Just thought I'd tell you. :)
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
it was my intention :)
thanks
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The-Lost-Hope Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Alright, and you're welcome :)
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wolflogics Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
cool :D
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
thanks ))
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