I'd prefer a version without the guy, writing this with the best intentions. I'm a fan of your work, I just think it's expressive "enough" with the bright girls' dress and the contrasting sea in the back. The guy.. is misplaced imho.
i ran across an image similar to this when searching for books on amazon. i immediately recognized you but don't know if you know you are on their cover. it's the paperback version of you against me by jenny downham.