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all of the children went to their beds,
a soft starry light guarding their heads;
hush now baby, don't you weep,
silence is just music put to sleep.
something that just came to my mind. and fingers.



thisisChristmas.
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word-s-myth Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Professional Writer
"silence is just music put to sleep": so simple and so true. I love it.
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rhodenel Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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SeersSword Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013   General Artist
My (future) kids will be sung this. :iconawesomesauceplz:
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
AWW :O thank you!!
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SeersSword Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013   General Artist
:tighthug: You're welcome.

Still tripping over the awesome :iconohgodlaplz:
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zoedow1120 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
This is amazing. Beautiful and calming.
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ambientdream Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
its amazing... I love this very much.
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
ahhh, thank you!
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Piscesandthediamonds Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
holy crap. you are amazing.
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:iconineedchemicalx:
iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
me? why? but thank you...
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laritaleyoupi Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
the silence is the best thing for love and peace....
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:iconineedchemicalx:
iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
:heart:
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laritaleyoupi Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you !
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alex-ok Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
This is very nice. :) gives silence a more lovely meaning.
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:iconineedchemicalx:
iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
thank you :)
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julycat12 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I WILL MAKE THIS A REAL LULLABY. I WILL PUT IT TO MUSIC AND SING MY KIDS TO SLEEP WITH THIS!!!!! :iconawesomenessplz:
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
my oh my, THANK YOU :love:
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Cyluho Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That few words and it is beautiful... so, why the hell do I talk that much if everything also can be said in less words ;P
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
ohhh, thank you!! sometimes i wonder about that, too :)
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
i like it and love it :)
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:iconineedchemicalx:
iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
thank you! :)
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Sure thing my friend
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SpireEx Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wonderful..... It's a pity that silence will get deafening when they'll become adults.....
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:iconineedchemicalx:
iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
hmmm....
then music shall come :)
thank you!
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SpireEx Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
;)
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Chocolatecookiecrumb Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Lovely <3
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
thank you :)
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Queen-Kitty Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012   Photographer
This is so lovely <3 Such beautiful and simple words!
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
aww, thank you... :heart:
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TeukkiSS Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist
beauty~ ^^
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
thankyou :)
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sumarlegur Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
those two final verses are lovely.
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
thank you.
very much.
!
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amiga-32 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
For in the dead of night we shall keep
The thoughts and prayers of the meek
For come Christmas morn they shall stir
and life will be but a wonderous blur

Of bright happy faces one and all
under the tree that stands so tall
As they open their presents with glee
They share the wonderous site
that greets thee :)

. Sorry i tried i ran out of puff :)
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
:)
super
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amiga-32 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
lol thanks i was just bored :) x
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Blopa1987 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I always liked writing, poetry, quotes, poems, etc.
words that come to my mind at the most unexpected moments, but I've never been able to show this work in deviantart.

I like what you wrote, especially the last part,
(silence is just music put to sleep) ^-^ foarte buna

and ... there's something I like, you have lots of visitors, many watch, but you are very humble, because you try to answer most of the messages people leave for you.
so everyone should be, humility and overcoming are words that go together.
saludos :D
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Why? Maybe you should try sharing it sometime!

Thank you... I just love the connections between people :)
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Blopa1987 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I do not know, I stopped writing for a while now, but has always been one of my passions.
may never have shown such work for fear that they are not really good.

and ... you're welcome :D
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CecilyRoseMidnight Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've never seen a poem so short that has struck so well as this one. Wonderful work, I wish I could see more poetry just as simple as this one.
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
my Goodness, thank you!
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CecilyRoseMidnight Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :)
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brookncole Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
Wow I don't think I've ever read a poem this short and thought it was good. This is lovely. :heart:
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
wooow me! thank you!
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brookncole Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
:giggle: you're welcome.
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sandyandi146 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
wow, tears in my eyes. very good.
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
i can't believe you're saying that... thank you... it is so simple...
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sandyandi146 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
you're welcome. I write poems sometimes, but I'm never satisfied with them, and hardly ever finish them.
just recently, I wrote,
"when my garden fills with snow,
I am filled with wonder.
Softly do the snowflakes blow,
and knock the grass asunder."
I have no idea how I'll finish it. lol
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iNeedChemicalX Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
ooh but it sounds lovely!
sometimes, the shorter, the better...
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sandyandi146 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
aww, thanks :)
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